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Join date : 2013-09-24
Age : 25
Location : Ontario

PostSubject: Kairu Zukinio   Tue Sep 24, 2013 8:50 am

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Name: Kairu Zuikino
True Age: 168
Gender: Male
Personality: Easy going and always polite to women no matter what has the highest respect for women but always seems to be flirting when he tries not to. Kairu is the type of guy that believes so highly in his morals and goals with no change that he is known to argue with others if they conflict with his morals and goals. He can easily be alone and loves to think but also if very friendly towards others. (Especially looking into the eyes of beautiful women.) Kairu usually stays to himself unless others come to him or speak with him, he has a tendency to stare into others eyes when they speak with him. Kairu speaks as if he is equal with others that changes with battle he becomes higher then his enemy when he speaks and always serious. Hates to fight with his friends and would always hold back in fear of hurting them even if it could get himself hurt.

Kairu has a low pain tolerance and cries often at the sign of pain he could stub a toe or trip over something and he would cry but in any sight of a women he would not he would suppress all tears or screams he may only be seen by a women when he is crying only while in battle. He would rarely ever go against what his Zanpakutō wished for he saw in is sword the way the move forward and he would always treat his friends with kindness is Zanpakutō is Kairu's friend. Kairu loves pets and would always talk to animals as if they understand him treating them like a child, is usually embarrassed by acting this way to animals but can't help it. When alone Kairu could listen to music for hours he likes all types of music but above all else is the piano he played piano and listened to it, every time he would drift away in his own mind.

He will tend to sacrifice himself in order to protect other no matter what the pain or result but if his emotions get the better of him he usually needs to be the one saved. Kairu always fights from his heart and if his heart goes against other people he would fight them as well if ally or not, this as well goes for superiors he would see fit to go against any order that goes against his heart. Kairu is often too soft on those who Kairu see's good reason behind their actions. If it is a women he becomes in a state of desperation in trying to convince the women to stop and go against their actions in a attempt to pardon and save them.
Those who see Kairu tend to underestimate him greatly due to his figure this allows Kairu to get the upper hand in battle but Kairu is very self-conscious of his look when not in battle because he wishes to impress women. Kairu will tend to fight with a crowd if he is sparring just having fun to show off his strength to others.

Kairu would fight to the death for his allies, his friends, because they are his treasures and will die before he loses them.

General Appearance
Appearance:
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Appearance Age: 24
Height: 6’1
Weight: 190 lbs


Natural  Abilities

Unreleased Abilities:
-Duel Blade
-Expert Zanjutsu
-Master Hohō
Zanpakutō:
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Zanpakutō Release Phrase: Hunt Ren Mai
Other Weapons: Knife

Zanpakutō Spirit


Zanpakutō Spirit Name: Ren Mai
Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance:
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Zanpakutō Spirit Personality:
Ren Mai would always speak to Kairu direct and firmly he would make sure Kairu knew what he wanted and why he was there, Kairu would always listen to Ran Mai, would be his friend. Ren Mai takes on a wise stereotype but at the odd times you can see when he becomes enrages almost like a wolf snarling at his prey. He hates the inner hollow and is scared of her at the same time but he does not show her fear for he does not want it to become a weakness.

Zanpakutō Spirit's World: Moon-lit meadow as far as the eye can see but if conflicted the moon will be clouded or Forrest will consume more and more of the land. This world can also be seen through Kairu's Stalk ability. It conveys how Kairu is feeling usually the more calm he is the environment will be open clear and no wind, if angry you could see as the meadow would be caught on fire with storms above as the ground is fiercely hit with lightning.

Shikai
Shikai: Ren Mai
Shikai Appearance: Does not change
Shikai Abilities:

Howl- The Zanpakutō will suck in air on the right blade and the left blade will build up electricity for a period of 2 posts this action will be very noticeable as you can see random gust of air surround the sword at random times and little bits of of electricity jump off then back onto the blade especially if in contact with another blade. After 2 posts the Zanpakutō's tip of the blade will be covered in wind and electrical like a arrow head and it may be shot whenever he pleases the wind can be used to ricochet projectile weapons back at the enemy or try to negate or deflect some abilities and deals no damage other than possible ricochet damage and flung objects, and the electrical portion is like a blade that can cut or just electrocute opponent. The slice can cut through steal but not the Zanpakutō, being electrocuted will burn your skin for one post or for however long you hold on to something conductive. Being together they just combine their strength, doing both of what’s listed being shot separately would be just what’s listed for that specific one shot. It will be stated in battle when its shot together or separate. These do not leave the blade until launched, and if Kairu keeps them attached to these they make the blades lighter and thus allowing him to attack faster with them. Cool-down for each separate blade 3 posts from when used. They may last for 4 posts once ready to be shot.

Cower - Kairu clashes both his blades just above the ground once as he says "Cower" A fog will begin to form from the ground and will become dense making visibility very low, this fog is made out of spiritual particles which makes it hard to be tracked though spiritual pressure in it.
The fog will not leave the ground for 4 posts. Cool-down: 4 post from when fog leaves ground.

Stalk- A Silver cube is made to separate Kairu and his enemy from others, making it only a 1 vs 1 battle, on the inside all colors are gone it is black and white, all the objects that were to be outside are seen from the inside as wavy and mixing into each other, If Kairu walks into the cube wall he would appear on the other side this works for all four sides. (stalk will absorb all spirit energy based attacks and negates it if it hits a wall, will not travel to other side only physical objects may pass through to other side unless the opponent is stronger or with more skill fires off at it. In that case the cube would break no go through to the other side.) (The cube is the size of 4000 square feet size of very large house ) This will take 2 posts to fully build, as its building it can destroyed by a large physical attack, any spiritual based attack will just be absorbed, when it is fully complete the only thing that can destroy it from the inside would be a large spiritual based attack, one that could not easily be absorbed, that of bankai attack or resurrection and ect. From the outside this can be destroyed easily by physical force only.

Light Box- Kairu may use the lighting built up in his blade by his ability Howl, to stab the ground with that blade that will the create a flash of light and a cube would form around Kairu that may block any Kidō up to number 63, the shield however cannot stop or slow down anything other than Kidō, and cero easily, but acts as electricity as if anything conductive touches it, it will then travel through it and if someone were to touch this shield it would cause 2nd degree burns, cisting up where touched and will burn for two posts. The shield will remain till it is broken or Kairu or another removes his blade from the ground. Longest duration if blade is left is 4 posts cool down 1 post
Varies based on opponents skill/power relative to Kairu's. Opponent Stronger = doesn't last as long, Weak Opponent = last longer.
Continuous spells or very strong spells would weaken the shield or could make the blade come out of the ground. (he is not required to hold it in the ground) others may hold it for him, but if the blade is not held it can easily be knocked for the ground without much effort but it will block that single attack.


Bankai

Bankai:
Bankai Appearance: Kairu swords dissipate into the wind becoming one with it, A circle of wind will form around Kairu about 8ft by 8ft it will act like wind like flames will flicker and leaves will be blown from this circle. Kairu's hair will be in constant motion and his hair will turn pure white as well as his eyes. He does not speak while in this form because no one would hear him over the wind.

Bankai Abilities:  Still May use prior abilities.

Passive: Due the the sword being the wind, his right hand will be covered in wind so he can block attacks by lifting his arms and his hand also can cut like a normal sword. His left hand will be covered in a coat of electricity. The wind that surrounds Kairu will have a slight charge all throughout it so those that enter this area will feel a shock that may sting.

No Name (arm signals): - Kairu would lift his right arm and point in a direction and wind would shoot from his circle in the shape of a blade that can cut through almost all materials except for iron or other swords. But this can be shot rapidly if he wishes or he could be patient with it. If Kairu fires his Wind blades rapidly they are half as strong as a concentrated blast. Shield abilities can still block these, depending on their strength.

No Name (arm signals): - Kairu would lift his left arm and point in a direction and lightning would shoot from his left arm in the shape of a blade that can cut through almost all materials except for iron or other swords. But this can be shot rapidly if he wishes or he could be patient with it. If Kairu fires his lighting blades rapidly they are half as strong as a concentrated blast. This acts as electricity if it hits something conductive electricity will run through it causing 2nd degree burns to whats touching it, but still cuts. Shield abilities can still block these, depending on their strength.

No Name(arm signals)- Kairu's arms would close his eyes as a signal to the wind and it would disrupt air flow and light to make himself temporarily invisible. Doing so if Kairu attacks in any way he becomes visible again and can only remain invisible for a max of 2 post.

No Name (Lifts both hands open then clenches them in front of him)- Clouds will begin to form if Kairu shoots lighting into the cloud it will then begin lightning strikes randomly all over. And the clouds will remain for 5 posts and cool down would be three posts. The lighting would never hit anyone but it would strike all around the battlefield randomly. (For appearance and changes the environment around the battle)

No Name (Lifts both arms to each side of him) - The wind surrounding Kairu will expand in area, he will have to hold both hands to each side of him as it expands the larger it expands depends on how long he can hold his arms out to each side of him, as well as it gets larger the more power the wind and electricity will gain. This will last for 3 posts after he lowers his arms.

-Hold for one post, x 2 in area (16ft by 16ft) x 1 in power, the wind around Kairu will spin and be able to roll around 30 lbs rocks, the electricity will feel as if someone was tearing your skin.
-Hold for two posts, x 1 in area (24ft by 24ft) x2 in power, the wind now able to pick up and spin around him, 60 lbs rocks, the electricity will begin to burn your flesh the longer the time in it.
-Hold for three posts, x 0 in area (24ft by 24ft) x 3 in power, the wind will be able to spin at an rapid speed that would make it very hard to enter the field that is able to throw things that weigh 170 lbs or less from the field and the electricity is able to destroy stones and would begin to burn your skin if you stay in it longer than 1 post. After you leave the field your skin will burn for 4 posts. After his arms lower it will continue for 3 post and then return to normal the cool down would be 4 posts after it ends. People that weigh 130 lbs or less may use their strength if they are strong enough to resist this, those that weigh less will find it difficult to attack due to they can not enter the field but it is possible. For all of the above the pain the electricity causes will consistently grow as you stay in the field become more painful.



Vizard Abilities

Inner Hollow Appearance:
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Inner Hollow Personality: Yông Yöu would always remind Kairu of his past not allowing him to forget it and always trying to bring despair into Kairu's heart trying to make it waver, waiting for the right moment she would try to conquer Kairu's body. She would fight Ren Mai with every meeting and when she speaks her voice alone brings sorrow, she has a ignorant and impolite way of speaking.

In dire need she would advise Kairu what she thinks should happen to avoid to much damage to the body she wishes to control and those who are about to kill Kairu, Yông Yöu would protect Kairu and attempt to eliminate his foe without his choice she will not take full control of his conscious sometimes, at times she may just force his arm to move.

When Yông Yöu battles men she tends to show a ounce of mercy and flirts with them but if a women is her opponent she shows no mercy especially to those of attractiveness nature. Yông Yöu is very jealous of beautiful features and attempts to destroy them.

Hollow Mask Appearance:
Spoiler:
 
His wind in bankai will turn black and he will always have water leak from his eyes as if he were crying.

Vizard Abilities:
- Increased Strength
- Increased Speed
- Spiritual Power/Pressure Double
--Wind Cero; High pressure wind would be shot out of his palm it would be made of the black wind around him and would have the same power as the Gran Rey Cero but when it hits a object or opponent the wind would act more like a blade leaving deep wounds and cuts.  
   but Kairu Zukinio can not use his cero unless in this situation.
- Regeneration; This heals anything except vital organs, if he has the energy left to use it.



Past & Roleplay Sample

Character Background:

Life:
A son left to die in the arms of his dead mother covered in blood at the age of one just outside of New York city. Saved by Tairaa an older man in his 40 this man became his father and named him Kairu after his father. Tairaa had hidden Kairu's past from him hoping he would grow one day happy and normal. His wish was coming true till one day the real father had heard of one who bears the name of the woman who he had killed which was Zukinio. He found the city and the home of Tairaa but Kairu was gone to school. Tairaa was home and tortured till death had fallen upon him, his attacker decided he would burn the proof of his sons existence since Tairaa didn’t speak a word of where Kairu was, the real father left the city.

Kairu arrived home to find his father dead inside they're burning house his father laying against the wall. Cuts all over Tairaa's body mutilating what image he use to have with blood dripping from his face. Kairu just looked into the blank eyes of his fathers; just gazing in them tears began to fall from Kairu's eyes yet still emotionless he grabbed what looked to be a letter from Tairaa's hand. Just walked outside and watched as the house burned as his life and all he cared for burned, feeling the fire in his body all the anger and hatred he left what life he had to burn.

Days later he read the note;"" I’m so sorry kairu, I tried to raise you from this I tried to help you forget but now it is back and always will be. I am so so sorry... I love you. Never forget that I will always be watching and waiting for you."

Love,
Your Dad Tairaa"

Death:

Kairu is confused in what he wished for justice or revenge but either decision, he knew he had to find his father. He had no home only the streets he roamed for days looking for clues and asking people if they know of his father, with no luck. Kairu searched for years and never gave up on his goal of finding his father, and one night when he wished to sleep for the night, as he was sitting in his alleyway to sleep he just had a glimpse of his father walking by. He ran out of the alleyway to see his father again having a cigarette just outside of a pub.

There was no hesitation in Kairu's mind as he sprinted at his father with clutched fists, his stomach twisted as he ran no thought in his head this was his instinct to kill. The father had seen Kairu and ran for the nearest alley to hide but it was far too late, Kairu had already blocked him in. The instant the father turned the impact of Kairu's fist drove his father’s head against the wall leaving a gash on his head. Kairu kicked his father and mounted on top as he drove his fist into his father’s face blood splatted everywhere. The father could not move, Kairu had picked up a piece of glass from the ground readied to slit his father’s throat but stopped. His father begged for his life but Kairu could not hear him for he was lost in thought and confusion he was lost would he kill or do what was right he thought.

As Kairu pushed this glass slightly cutting his throat he stood up from his father but the instant Kairu stood the father had shot him three times in the chest, as Kairu bled on the ground gasping for air as the lungs filled with blood, the father laid on the ground and had said "I'm so sorry" and shot himself in the head. Kairu's life flashed before his eyes and all he did was smile and had said, "finally".

Kairu Zukinio died that night at the age of 24.

Time in Soul Society before the Academy:

Kairu awoke in the Soul Society on a bridge crossing, confused he panicked not knowing what was going on around him he ran. As he ran he didn't understand what was going on or where he was nothing was the same all he could do was keep running. Kairu ran till he couldn't breathe, sweat dripping down his brow he stopped and hid in a corner in between a stall and to be looked like someone’s resident.

He could see flashes of his old life and he could remember his old life. Kairu remembered everything but how he got to the soul society, Kairu kept asking himself if he was dead and finally after hours someone answered him. A boy looking to be the same age as himself told Kairu the process of being sent the soul society. This boy not knowing much only told him of how a shinigami would have sent him here and that is all. Kairu gazing at the ground as he was sucked into deep thought never said a word for hours but this boy sat down by his side until the sunset, the boy asked if he would like to stay with him for a while, Kairu didn't answer just followed.

40 years has past still no word escaped Kairu's mouth, Kairu had taken up a job farming with this boy who he said his name was Sadako. He always smiled and accepted that Kairu never asked for rent or money of sorts but Kairu still left money on the table every time he was able. One day out in the field as they were just harvesting some crops Kairu sees a beautiful woman pass by with long brown hair and the bluest and most beautiful eyes he had ever seen pass by and suddenly just spurt out the words, "wow", Sadako stood immediately looked at Kairu and was amazed that Kairu spoke. Sadako started to try and get Kairu to speak more frequently he was simply happy just with yes and no's at first and slowly tried to get more and more out of Kairu and he did so.

52 years had passed since Kairu had arrived in the Soul Society and Kairu and Sadako were having full conversations now. Kairu was fascinated by women and spoke of them the most and always in a highly respectable manor. Sadako and Kairu were working one day and Sadako stopped and told Kairu he would like for him to meet someone that has become important to him. Sadako meet a beautiful woman while working when Kairu was sick. Of course Kairu agreed so they finished their work and they made a bigger dinner that night. Time went by it and was getting very late the weather was a terrible black sky as it rained, Sadako became worrisome and ran out to look for this woman. Kairu and Sadako split up and the only description that was given was that Kairu would know when he saw her. Kairu searched for hours and started to head back to see if there was any luck on Sadako side, as he walks in his direction he saw him and her. Sadako and the woman with the most beautiful blue eyes, they were kissing in the rain, Kairu stayed hidden and felt something down in the pit of his stomach, and this was jealousy. Sadako and the girl made their way back to his home to find a letter Kairu left, Kairu had decided he could not watch them be all lovey dovey around him, therefor he wrote a note saying that Kairu had thought that they may enjoy the night alone and maybe later on he would meet this woman.

Kairu planned on sleeping in an alleyway again the rain had no affect on him some reason he had felt like he was use to the cold of the rain. As he walked no one was around it was just himself alone, he thought to himself that he needed something just he wasn't sure what immediately though. He wandered for three hours before he figured it out,  it was to meet this woman. Sadako has given so much to him but he refused to see this woman and he felt guilty for it. He ran towards Sadako's home to only hear a scream from inside, Kairu’s heart pounded as he smashed open the door to see Sadako had pushed this woman into the wall of his home.

He calmed down just from seeing that Sadako was alright and as he walked towards him asking what was, the issue he froze in place. Looking at the woman’s face in such horror his heart started to pound again as Sadako said nothing, Kairu said his name in hope of a answer there was only silence as Sadako turned Kairu's eye's had widened looking into the Sadako’s blank eyes. Kairu remembered seeing those eye's before, Kairu suddenly heard a whisper come from Sadako saying, "Come closer please." and Sadako repeated over and over again saying it faster "Come closer.... closer" until suddenly it became a screech. Unbearable screech as his teeth got sharper and more teeth began to appear in his mouth like a shark, Kairu's only thought was to run but he couldn't not with the woman trapped there. Kairu stopped thinking and threw a glass vase at Sadako and picked up this woman in his arms and ran as fast as he could, no one was willing to help he was alone. The creature appeared in front of Kairu, he realized running was pointless he could not run as fast as Sadako, and he had felt as if hiding would not work as work so Kairu set the woman down on a bench and prepared his mind thinking it was the right thing to do.

Kairu could only hear laughing as Sadako came near and the night became heavy the rain has faded but the sky still black as the wind howled in between the houses. Kairu was frightened and grasp what was going on he stood near this woman looking down at her and a tear came from his eye, He would protect this woman for Sadako and himself she was important to both of them. Kairu could now hear someone breathing in front of him heaving; as Kairu looked up he could only see white this creature had Sadako's body white as snow and a giant whole in is chest as if something cut a circle through his body. Kairu looked at his face and his eye's they were blank just like that night the night everything burned, Kairu cried while looking into Sadakos eye's but this creature saw no reason to wait as teeth appear all over in the mouth of Sadakos body as it rushed forward screaming "Come closer!" and Kairu could only look into his eyes and wonder why this happened to his friend. The pain that came afterwards as blood coated Kairu's arm, he could only yell out in pain as his body was smashed aside into the street, his arm became numb Sadako had cut open Kairu's arm by biting him, the teeth did not pierce far but he had no use of left arm. Kairu could not think with his heart pounding so loud but he stood to challenge Sadako once more. Sadako was not interested in Kairu for some reason though, and only wanted to get to the woman, Kairu had no choice but to tackle Sadako onto the wet ground face to face they were Kairu cried as he gazed upon his face and into his eye's and screamed at Sadako's face, “Why are you doing this?!, I thought you cared about her?!".

Kairu began to fly through the air into the bench that this woman was laid upon, he tried to stand but couldn't his body would not listen anymore. His body was numb he had the strength but his body refused, he could only gaze into Sadako's eyes as they came forward so slowly and Kairu said, "I'm sorry.... I'm so sorry I couldn’t protect you, I should have stayed with you!" he cried, “We’ll if this is my end I'm happy it’s you I could have had no better..."
Suddenly a black figure had appeared behind Sadako and a sword pierced his stomach in a upward swing blood sprayed on Kairu, as his friend fell to the ground fell to the ground he could only watch, so badly he wanted to catch his friend but couldn't move. I hand appeared from this black kimono and said, “That was not your friend so you shouldn't have given up so easily he had no mercy for you." Kairu let one last tear from his eye as everything faded to black.

20 years has passed since Sadako had died Kairu had healed from what was paralysis. The woman was not so lucky and has been permanently paralyzed from the waist down, Kairu stayed with this woman and took care of her. He felt as if it was his responsibility and that would've been what Sadako wanted. He cooked and cleaned for this lady, he still thought she was beautiful and her eyes breath taking. This woman’s name was Mizuki, she had grown attached to Kairu but no matter what Kairu couldn't, his mind always thought of Sadako. Kairu wanted to move on and if he stayed he wouldn't be able to do so, he knew what he wanted. He wanted to get stronger he needed to become a shinigami.

Kairu had to tell Mizuki before he left but first to make her one last dinner which would be dumplings that night, dumplings were her favorite. Kairu just hoped to see her smile one last time before he left. As Kairu cooked the dumplings he had heard someone knock on the door, he called Mizuki, “Can you get that please?" He continued to cook for an hour longer till the food was complete, Kairu entered from the kitchen, " Mizuki what would you like to drink tonight and who was at the door?" Mizuki replied, " Saki for three please, our guest is still here." As Kairu entered the living area he said, " wow this must be a close friend of your to be staying this late." Mizuki replied with, “Actually I believe that she would be a good friend of yours and she has been waiting very patiently." As Kairu looked up he saw a black kimono. Kairu, “I am very sorry Yumi I didn't...." Yumi interrupts Kairu with, " It's alright you know I won't mind, how have you been?" Yumi was a cheerful woman always smiling always making other around her smile, she had short blond hair and was 5'8.

This is the woman who saved them that night, Kairu felt he owed everything to these women. Kairu replied, “I’m magnificent now that you are here Yumi." Mizuki only shook her head and Kairu asked, “Would you like something? Dinner was just about to start." Yumi hesitates on the answer but then nods saying, “No, I'm alright thank you."

Kairu then stands and head into the kitchen bring back two plates of dumplings and a box of pockey sticks, setting two sticks on each plate and taking one out for himself he sits. Mizuki states, “Kairu you are truly amazing, thank you so much." Yumi replies," Yes he is truly amazing." Mizuki looks confusingly at Yumi. Kairu states," Thank you, but please eat before it cold." he smiles and they both nod in agreement. Yumi then stops to ask where Kairu's dinner was but Kairu lied and said he wasn’t hungry and asked Yumi," May I ask why are you visiting? Your company is certainly amazing though." Kairu smiled as Yumi blushed, Mizuki seemed uninterested as she bite down on food. Yumi nods and sits straight. “I’ve come looking to recruit you Kairu." Mizuki's eyes widened but stayed silent, Kairu did not know what to think but he asked, " why me? Yumi?" Then Mizuki jokingly says, " Yea why him he's just a cowardly cook." Kairu laughs with his head down a bit only to hear a "SLAP!" Kairu looks up to find that Yumi has slapped Mizuki; she was surprised as Yumi screamed, “Never say that! even as a joke!" Yumi calmed and continued, “Kairu saved you yet you call him cowardly, he stood against something he know he couldn't deal with to save you." "He could have ran but he stayed, you would call that cowardly? Have you seen his scars that should remind you he was there and still is." Kairu could only stare as Yumi stood and made her way to the door, "I am very sorry for my rudeness the offer stand Kairu I’ll give you some time to think. If you decide you would like to accept the offer please meet me in two days at the gate." Yumi leaves. Kairu and Mizuki sat quiet for a long period of time till Kairu said, “Mizuki I’m going to go become a shinigami." Mizuki stayed quiet as her eye's watered, Kairu knew that Mizuki cared for him but this was something he had to do to move forward. Kairu said, “Mizuki I will send money to you from time to time to pay for someone to come cook and clean for you so you don't have to, I want to be able to send you letters from time to time if that is alright?" Mizuki cried as she said, “Of course" Kairu just smiles hoping to see Mizuki's smile one more time but she didn't smile.

Kairu awoke the next morning only to see Mizuki laying next to him in bed, he was not surprised but embraced her as she looked up and smiled she said, " I made you some breakfast before you go. I hope you enjoy it," as she got herself into her wheel chair she said, “come". Kairu couldn't help but smile, Mizuki had made grilled hida beef, sashimi, tempura, miso soup and with a glass of tea.
Kairu stated, " Wow Mizuki you went all out this is just amazing!. Taste delicious as well!" Mizuki could only blush and say, " I just don't want you forgetting me that all." Kairu set his food down and walked over to Mizuki and hugged her for several minutes to then say, “I would never forget you, and I hope you would never forget me." Mizuki pulled Kairu closer as she said, " never"

That night Kairu left Mizuki's home only thinking of the smile he got as Kairu walked from the house.

Time in Academy:

It took 32 years after that event for Kairu become one of the lowest ranked shinigami, but Kairu always waited knowing he would make his way up, it was like a tree he started at the truck but he would someday make his way to the sun. He was very excited to be in the same squad as Yumi. He realized it took 32 years to just make it to the same squad as Yumi, but just being able to watch Yumi while she is in battle amazed him as her sword looked divine just like a captains released sword. The day Kairu made it on the same squad as Yumi they became a lot closer as friends and Kairu hid his emotions well but began to love Yumi. They ate together and walked together as friends and they battled together, no matter what Kairu was always watching Yumi and one day that had gotten him hurt. A hollow had noticed this weakness and waited to strike catching Kairu's chest in downward swing cutting open Kairu's chest. As Yumi went over to assist Kairu she heard her sword howl as she neared him. She was confused as it howled louder and louder but she couldn't let this stop her as she sprinted over Kairu was on the ground Yumi jumped in front of this hollow.

The howling turned into a growl as Yumi was smashed to the ground by this hollow and the sword fell towards the ground and rolled towards Kairu's. Kairu went to grab any sword nearby and it happened to be hers. It began to glow when he picked the blade up, but he did not notice as his only concern was the hollow which in the next moment Yumi watch as Kairu pierced the mask of the hollow and the Zanpakutō split into two splitting from the hollows mask splitting down both of its arms. Yumi looked surprised yet disappointed as Kairu was in amazement. That was the last hollow as Yumi stood she said, "congratulations" as she walked away, Kairu turned and said," What happened?" she replied with, " It's yours, keep it." then disappeared.

Kairu didn't sleep that night, he could only stare at his new sword to the point that he had to try, he stood and practiced all night to split this sword or just to make it howl, he was determined to get something from this sword. Morning has come and still nothing, Kairu is exhausted and has to head out to meet Yumi, Kairu has decided to give back what was hers. As Kairu walked into the Shinigami training area Yumi was not there, thinking she would only be late Kairu started to train ahead of time, as time passed Yumi never showed up. Kairu was worried and as he was walking out of the area she walked in just stood in front of Kairu and you could only see disappointment in her eyes. Kairu couldn't understand why, as he walked over to Yumi to greet her she pulled out a new Zanpakutō and charged at Kairu, Kairu surprised but defends accordingly thinks that this is just them training.

She looked into Kairu's eye's when they clashed and just asked, " Why you?" he was confused, he felt her sword forced down on him harder then she had ever done. Kairu asked, "Yumi can you settle down a bit, what’s wrong?" She forced him forward and thrust-ed her Zanpakutō towards his leg, just cutting the side of his leg. Kairu stepped back and yelled, " What is wrong with you!?" She looked at him and as Kairu looked into her eyes she whispered, “I hate you." Kairu's eyes widened as he asked, " why?" she replied yelling," I've tried so much harder so much longer then you, why would you have found your Zanpakutō!? Where is mine? Where is my chance?" Kairu looked down at his new Zanpakutō, then looked up, "If this is what you want then take it!" he threw the sword down to the ground towards her, Yumi yelled, " It can’t just be fixed like that!, pick your sword up now!" Kairu just put his head down as he said, "no" Yumi just looked down and said, "fine"

Kairu could only hear a whisper, "This is not your friend, so don't give up so easy, she will show you no mercy." Kairu whispered to himself, “So you are serious".
Kairu kneels as Yumi charges her old friend blade pointed directly at a broken heart, as she is about to pierce his chest he parries her blade with the side of his hand and then he rolled towards his Zanpakutō it glowed he grabbed his Zanpakutō and swung in a upward motion to predict as Yumi sword would be striking down upon him, he was correct.

Swords clashed and sparked, time seemed to slow as the area faded he awoke laying in a meadow it was raining, as the moon was clouded he could feel the tall grass around him blow in the wind. He stood to look over the land, it was meadows as far as the eye could see. As he looked two blue eyes in the grass appeared, they look calm just like the moon but Kairu was cautious and reached for his Zanpakutō to find nothing, these eyes said, “You know what you want why don't you take it." "Why do you hesitate?, I am ..... I will help you, I have chosen you." The clouds fade from the moon and the moon shines bright revealing all the grass and as Kairu fades from this world he saw a white wolf looking into Kairu's eye's almost like this creature was judging him.

Kairu awoke in darkness, Yumi whispered," This is the darkness and this is your end." Yumi could only hear Kairu whisper saying, " I'm sorry" As Yumi jumped through the darkness at Kairu he said in a disappointed tone, " Hunt Ren Mai" Yumi's eyes winded as Kairu cried. Blood dripped down both of Kairu's arms his blades slowly coming out of Yumi’s stomach, Kairu said, " I'm sorry this can't be my end Yumi, do you remember that night you saved my life?" "You said don’t give up so easy this is not your friend." “I won’t give up you are not my friend, Where is she?" Yumi just looked up into Kairu's eyes and said," I'm so sorry" Yumi rubbed her hand along Kairu's face the blood smeared on his face but Kairu didn't mind he just cried as he knew this was the last touch of his closest friend she said, " this is my end." she smiled as her hand fell the ground.

Kairu sat there for two days before someone found them, he looked at nothing, they could tell he was crying but the rain hid his tears, and the blood stained his chest.

Kairu sat in custody for many hours, after yet another questioning with no answers given, he sat alone again for hours and as the sun fell he looked up to see his Zanpakutō's spirit Ren Mai just sitting in front of him. Ren Mai remained silent, knowing he couldn't say anything to make this easier or better for Kairu but he just sat there so that there was someone nearby for him just to be able to feel a presence. More time passed, it was late night when Ren Mai then began to snarl randomly, Kairu turning his head looked outside his cell to see a man standing there holding his blades.

"Will you come with me?" the stranger asked randomly, Kairu couldn't see his face under his cloak, the stranger then said again, "Will you stay or will you come with me?" he asked again calmly. Kairu stood and walked closer to the stranger, the stranger held Kairus' blades within the cell within Kairu's reached, grabbing them Kairu then sat down again. Ren Mai then calmed as the blades were in his masters possession. The stranger then unlocked the cell door, Kairu looked over “Where did you get the key and who are you to be able to get my weapons without anyone noticing your presence.” The man continued and opened the door, “It’s your choice whether you wish to follow me or not, but I’m at the end of the only path that could bring your Yumi back to you.” Kairu remained speechless and couldn't focus on anything there were to many thought bouncing around in his head, and before giving Kairu any time to think the man then began to walk away, Kairu acting on impulse then followed the man who freed him but also trapped him.

Escaping Serenity from the way the stranger came in the two then found themselves in a small village about a two day journey from Serenity it seemed to be excluded from most places surrounded by forest. Kairu having had a lot of time to think, but now having the time since the two then appeared to be relaxing in what seemed to be the strangers cabin asked, “What power can I obtain that can bring her back and why is it you who can only give it to me?” the man smirked a bit before he replied, “because I am the only one willing too, but for a price of course… If you’re willing to allow me to do a single experiment I’ll tell you where to find an item named Siyoku, this is an item of the past that has been hidden but has the power to change life and for you it may bring your Yumi and anyone else you wish back to you.” The stranger said all this while having a slight smirk on his face, and Kairu knew he shouldn't trust this man but he couldn't give up the opportunity. “What’s the experiment you wish to do?” Kairu asked knowing he probably wouldn't care just like he didn't ask for the strangers name, he doesn't want to know he just wants the power to bring her back.

The man held up a syringe that contained a white liquid in it, “ I want to inject hollow DNA into you, this will give you the power that is needed to obtain the Siyoku and much more, but there is a chance of death of course.” Kairu's blades began to vibrate he could tell easily that Ren Mai disagreed but this is something Kairu would be willing to go through to obtain Yumi's life as well as he would need it for now he was a wanted man. “What would you gain from this?” Kairu was curious, and with a quick reply the stranger said, “Of course results and when the results make me happy I myself with do this and acquire what I wish and that is to kill someone, and I will need this power to do so.”
Kairu slightly looked down as he said, “Well lets begin then” as he then laid down on the kitchen table nearby, the man walked up next to him as he pushed the point of the needle through his skin he then said before he injected him, “ I will find you later on for I won't be here when you awake and for your sake you should hope no one is.” Kairu then quickly fell asleep.

Awakening in his spirit world but this time the moon was blocked by clouds and the usually open meadow was now surrounded by forest he couldn't see Ren Mai anywhere but a the dark of night suddenly began to get darker as he now could only see ten feet in front of him, he then heard, “Aren’t you a cutie.” turning around quickly Kairu now saw a woman standing in front of him she stood about 5'6 and her eye's a shiny dark blue, he remained silent, “The names Yông Yöu and I think I want your body cutie.” Kairu then reached for his Zanpakutō's to find nothing, the woman stood there shaking her finger “ah, no I don't think so” she said as she then revealed Kairu's blades that were hidden behind her back, then dropped them to the ground.

She then grabbed from her hip a small throwing dagger and twiddled it around with her fingers, “So will you just give me it?” the woman asked as she then held the dagger firm in her left hand. Kairu remained silent but then readied himself standing tall as he watched her and awaited for her first move, “I didn't think so” she said as she then began to dissipate as gust of wind past her, “I'll just have to force my way in then” Kairu fought many enemies who could use some form of invisibility or masking of presence making this not so surprising to him, he remained to stand still and tall. “You’re going to have to do something if you wish to live” the woman said, Kairu could slightly feel wind pass behind his back as the woman spoke again, “It’s a pity I have to harm so a cute..” she was then interrupted as Kairu felt another breeze of wind pass by his chest so he then reached out and grabbed anything he could feel in front of him. The woman then reappeared, Kairu held her head in her hands, as he lifted her off the ground she grumbled, “Bastered” in an attempt to stab his arm with her dagger Kairu then squeezed her head as he then smash it to the ground. “This is the power I needed? Such weakness, It’s hard to be weaker in strength then myself.”

He could then begin to feel tears beneath his palm, releasing her head she cried, he then sat next to her she sat up as well. The both just sat there for a moment before he said, “If I leave you be will you become more powerful?” she smiled a bit still having left over tears on her face, “If you leave me I will get more powerful but it may result as your death.” Kairu stood then walked over to his blades of the ground and picked them up, “That's something I will deal with later, but for now I will use you and you will do as I say.” she replied quickly after, “only because I can't take you now”. Kairu then walked back to the woman and then kneel-ed behind her, “If you ever can then you may take my body only after I've achieved what I wish.” he then grabbed her shoulder and plunged one of his blades into her back, “your hand are soft but the blade is hard and cold, just as your heart is and will continue to be.” she said as she then began to fade away and as she did the moon began to reappear over the meadow and the forest began to disappear around it.

Kairu then awakened looking around he noticed he wasn't on the table any longer but outside with the remains of the cabin all over and the forest around him set ablaze, he now knew why the man didn't wish to stay but when would the stranger reveal himself again he was curious. Kairu could not remain there too long men may arrive shortly due to the smoke and flames, he then ran in a random direction just to get himself away from the area in hope he wouldn't be found. He would begin the search for the item on his own.

Roleplay Sample:

"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone."
He stared out into the distance as he thought of what the women of his past said, looking onto the never ending Forrest below he sat upon the edge of the wall. He took a moment to think about it a couple seconds longer before standing slowly and turning to acknowledging the attendant who stood behind him for a couple of minutes silent.

"Kairu your being summoned immediately by Captain Commander, pardon me for standing await for your thoughts to pass..." the attendant stopped talking half way through his sentence as Kairu then reached his hand out and rubbed the attendant's head as he walked by, "Thank you, I'm on my way, while gone could you please sit here for me and think of this meaning for me? A women once told me for beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." His hand then slipped off the attendants head as he then poofed away using shunpo leaving the attendant behind.

Kairu entering the room he remained silent first taking the time to look around the room at those he hasn't met yet, "hmm interesting" he said out loud as he then took his time to walk to his assigned spot, as he then positioned himself he then allowed his head to fall forward slightly as he then began to think to himself again as he awaited for the meeting to begin.[/u]


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PostSubject: Re: Kairu Zukinio   Wed Sep 25, 2013 9:03 pm

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Alright, first off, it might help if you are careful with your sentences.  A few of them are run on's.

As for powers
Cower, what kind of cool down does it have?  It is gonna need one.

Stalk, depending on power, energy attacks will have to be able to break through.  If someone stronger than him or with enough skill fired off an energy attack, it would break through.

Light box, okay if it can block Kidō that high up, continuous spells would have to weaken the shield or his hold on it.  Not to mention someone a lot stronger than him might be able to break it with lower level spells (how much lower depends on their skill/their power relative to Kairu's).

Strike out Bankai, you shall not have it yet.  The abilities in Bankai won't be approved, due the variable possibility for power of when he could achieve Bankai, so if Kairu does ever unlock it they will have to be approved then.

Now for inner hollow, NO Cero Doble.  That is a technique signature to Nelliel Tu Odelschwanck.

As for history, make sure you put in all important details.  For instance, I have no idea why the house just started to burn.

Second, you keep saying women instead of woman.  Women is plural, woman is single.
Also, you can NOT be a Vizard if you don't explain how he became one.  You explained how he got Shikai and stopped.  Either change this to a Shinigami or add that to his history.  Once all is done, inform me and I shall recheck.

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PostSubject: Re: Kairu Zukinio   Fri Oct 04, 2013 12:50 am

It has been awhile since I checked this app, this app shall be moved to WIP until corrections have been made, at which point I will move it back and recheck.

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PostSubject: Re: Kairu Zukinio   Tue Oct 15, 2013 8:43 am

I've done what was asked of me, srry it took awhile its just that I had a lot of work with the program I'm in.
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PostSubject: Re: Kairu Zukinio   Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:33 pm

Alright, unfortunately there is still a little to be fixed. In the history, you mention Serenity like it is a place. Is it some location Kairu was in? Or is it just a metaphor. Also, this one may be my fault for not noticing the first time, but for increased strength, speed, and the spiritual pressure/pressure double (especially the last one), it would be nice if you gave a description of the effects. How much strength and speed? Is one stronger than the other, or is it balanced? I also have NO idea what pressure double means, if it is literally doubled pressure or what, I'm going to need a description on that. Finally, this is just preference, but usually the fight against one's inner hollow is a bit harder than what you wrote. I'm not making it a requirement, but I would prefer that battle being a bit harder for your character.

Get those done, and this app should be ready for approval, sorry for the long waiting times.

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PostSubject: Re: Kairu Zukinio   Tue Nov 19, 2013 1:19 am

Due to the extensive things needing to be fixed and the fact that this person hasn't been on for quite some time, I am putting this into Denied, not WIP.
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